In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse)
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Thanks, dale. Yes, I'll use that suggestion. I agree with you both but it would take me forever to rewrite the last two lines (and have to come up with a different rhyme). It took me an hour just to write those five lines initially! I was dreading it, so thanks for fixing. I just got to fix a couple other things before reposting.
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RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by CRNDLSM - 12-19-2020, 03:35 AM
RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by philip - 12-31-2020, 07:19 AM
RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Erthona - 01-04-2021, 03:23 AM
RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Knot - 01-05-2021, 10:36 PM
RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Erthona - 01-13-2021, 02:25 PM
RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Torkelburger - 01-13-2021, 11:34 PM
RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Erthona - 01-16-2021, 06:51 PM



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