01-13-2021, 02:25 PM
Torkelburger,
Some further thoughts:
I agree with Knot on the the 4th line. I suppose one could take out "crash", but then it's less dynamic, nor really solves the problem.
Maybe...
"I watch the waves crash on the shore a countless hour"
That makes a six foot line but line 3 is also six foot. It also resolves the hour/hours dilemma.
just a thought,
dale
Some further thoughts:
I agree with Knot on the the 4th line. I suppose one could take out "crash", but then it's less dynamic, nor really solves the problem.
Maybe...
"I watch the waves crash on the shore a countless hour"
That makes a six foot line but line 3 is also six foot. It also resolves the hour/hours dilemma.
just a thought,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.