A Toast to the New Year

[Erthona]

Thanks Duke
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Knot,

"fold of coming night" a gathering on New Years Eve.

"Wondered about 'may we', instead of 'let us'," It is the difference between "let us hold hands" and "may we hold hands".

"do you need the first two lines?" Yes, it describes the transitory nature of life.


L6, should it be 'for' rather than 'of'?"

"of" is referencing "stone", thus "stone of sins". "stone for sins" doesn't really make sense. Stone here is used in the sense of weight, or being "weighed down." Thus the weight of our sins, as though one is carrying a burden that can be unburdened on New Years Eve.

Thanks for pointing this out as I do need to remove the comma after stone.

Thanks for the comments,

best,

dale