01-04-2021, 03:23 AM
Torkelburger,
Yes, indeed, change to "spun". Possibly a different title, this one seems a tad stale. Otherwise a delightful form, which you accomplished without it seeming forced. A very clever poem.
best,
dale
Yes, indeed, change to "spun". Possibly a different title, this one seems a tad stale. Otherwise a delightful form, which you accomplished without it seeming forced. A very clever poem.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.