Nursery Rhyme

[rowens]

He kissed with his eyes
And I acted surprised,
As if my world hadn't crumbled
Half an hour ago.



One effective point, would be to make the stanzas three-lined,

He kissed with his eyes, and I acted surprised,
as if my world hadn't crumbled
half an hour ago.









I kissed with my smile
And we stood for a while,
As butterflies bumbled
In the crystal snow.



And in this case:


I kissed with my smile, and we stood for a while,
as butterflies bumbled
in the crystal snow.



And to add some flavor

I kissed with a smile, and we stood the while
butterflies bumbled
in the snow.







You see the flavor I mentioned?



Your touch still lingered
And you twiddled your fingers,
As birds mumbled,
You love him so.

The chirps slowly died
With our lips and eyes,
As we stumbled
Slowly home.