In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse)

In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse)

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12-31-2020, 07:19 AM

Hello.
a fun poem I enjoyed reading.

Just a couple of suggestions for the second line.

the maelstrom spin by Neptune’s son, sun - the maelstrom spun by Poseidon's son, sun

Philip

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In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Torkelburger - 12-19-2020, 01:08 AM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by CRNDLSM - 12-19-2020, 03:35 AM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Torkelburger - 12-19-2020, 03:48 AM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by philip - 12-31-2020, 07:19 AM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Erthona - 01-04-2021, 03:23 AM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Torkelburger - 01-05-2021, 01:13 AM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Knot - 01-05-2021, 10:36 PM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Erthona - 01-13-2021, 02:25 PM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Torkelburger - 01-13-2021, 11:34 PM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Torkelburger - 01-14-2021, 04:19 AM

RE: In Praise of Triton (Echo Verse) - by Erthona - 01-16-2021, 06:51 PM

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