Aging (a Triolet)
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I think I put in the padded words because the example poem I saw when I researched the form used them. Upon further research, I see that there is not a strict meter to the form, just the rhyme scheme/line order and number of lines. So I think this should work:

Aging

I'm too old to climb a tree.
I’d fall and break a bone.
Not as agile as I used to be,
I’m too old to climb a tree.
The years have passed too fast for me.
I wish I hadn’t grown.
I’m too old to climb a tree.
I’d fall and break a bone.
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Aging (a Triolet) - by Torkelburger - 12-02-2020, 09:36 AM
RE: Aging (a Triolet) - by Tiger the Lion - 12-02-2020, 02:03 PM
RE: Aging (a Triolet) - by Torkelburger - 12-02-2020, 11:58 PM
RE: Aging (a Triolet) - by Torkelburger - 12-19-2020, 12:59 AM



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