12-14-2020, 11:05 PM
Hey T-
I thought the crescent moon form (collom lune) had a structure of 3-5-3.
Of course, it can be modified at the whim of the poet.
That said, I was hoping for a stronger image and perhaps the 3-5-3 could tease it out.
Difficult form to work in, and I appreciate your effort...
Thanks!
... Mark
I thought the crescent moon form (collom lune) had a structure of 3-5-3.
Of course, it can be modified at the whim of the poet.
That said, I was hoping for a stronger image and perhaps the 3-5-3 could tease it out.
Difficult form to work in, and I appreciate your effort...
Thanks!
... Mark