The Shebang (Abstact/Sound Poem)
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hello Torkelburger,

nice sonics in this ditty of course, although some of the word-choices come across as rather arbitrary.

the shebang - their shebang ?

panged - rang or swang ?

And sang in orangutan slang - to make it more immediate ?

cheers............P
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RE: The Shebang (Abstact/Sound Poem) - by philip - 12-03-2020, 12:48 AM
RE: The Shebang (Abstact/Sound Poem) - by Knot - 12-09-2020, 03:30 AM
RE: The Shebang (Abstact/Sound Poem) - by CRNDLSM - 12-09-2020, 08:54 AM



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