Aging (a Triolet)
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Thanks, Tiger! I lost count on how many forms I've tried. Still trying to find which ones speak to me and which ones don't. I probably have another dozen or more to try out, give or take a few. Maybe I'll post my thoughts someday on them in a discussion thread. Yes, I was trying to be cognizant of filler words. I decided to let "And" slide, but I totally missed "now". Thanks for bringing it to my attention. I'll see if I can come up with a solution at some point.
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Aging (a Triolet) - by Torkelburger - 12-02-2020, 09:36 AM
RE: Aging (a Triolet) - by Tiger the Lion - 12-02-2020, 02:03 PM
RE: Aging (a Triolet) - by Torkelburger - 12-02-2020, 11:58 PM
RE: Aging (a Triolet) - by Torkelburger - 12-19-2020, 12:59 AM



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