11-30-2020, 10:37 PM
hello Duke,
You seem to be reading too much into a simple, literal haiku.
Although, 'captured' would be more accurate, 'stolen' suffices. Sunlight strikes the moon's surface and is reflected back with a change in frequency to appear silver. That's it!
Any perceived metaphors are entirely the responsibility of the reader - and the punctuation is perfectly fine for me.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.............P
You seem to be reading too much into a simple, literal haiku.
Although, 'captured' would be more accurate, 'stolen' suffices. Sunlight strikes the moon's surface and is reflected back with a change in frequency to appear silver. That's it!
Any perceived metaphors are entirely the responsibility of the reader - and the punctuation is perfectly fine for me.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.............P