11-30-2020, 03:48 AM
We all love our beds dont we?
Enjoyed reading this, read it 3 times and tried to speed up reading it so that i could sense the rhythm.
Poetry is love, so why not a bed instead of a person.
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Enjoyed reading this, read it 3 times and tried to speed up reading it so that i could sense the rhythm.
Poetry is love, so why not a bed instead of a person.
This is insufficient critique for this forum. Please take a moment to read the critique guidelines for each forum before posting. Thank you.
—Quix/admin