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11-27-2020, 04:42 AM

Hello EWO,

Nice imagery within the haiku form, I enjoyed reading.
Good advice already given, but for me, the last line needs rephrasing into something more original.

just my thoughts..........P

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poinsettia field - by easywayout - 10-06-2020, 06:35 PM

RE: poinsettia field - by Magpie - 10-06-2020, 11:16 PM

RE: poinsettia field - by easywayout - 10-08-2020, 03:32 PM

RE: poinsettia field - by philip - 11-27-2020, 04:42 AM

RE: poinsettia field - by easywayout - 01-28-2021, 03:15 PM

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