Creation
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Hello Socialite, thank you for reading and commenting.

Hello Miley, thank you dropping by and commenting.

a question often heard - is most necessary.
It shows that the narrator is not answering their own question, which would be rather dull.
It implies that the question is an old-age mystery.
The line gives the reader a pause to reflect on the question.
The syntax is perfectly fine.

because - because as I've already explained. It is an explanation, and without it, the grammar and hence the message, do not make sense.
and I like the stand alone line 'because no matter' which chimes with the context.

You want imagery in absolutely nothing? Good luck...

cheers..........P
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Messages In This Thread
Creation - by philip - 11-18-2020, 02:31 AM
RE: Creation - by Bunx - 11-19-2020, 05:16 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 11-20-2020, 12:17 AM
RE: Creation - by Socialite - 11-20-2020, 12:26 AM
RE: Creation - by Miley - 11-22-2020, 04:51 PM
RE: Creation - by philip - 11-27-2020, 02:01 AM
RE: Creation - by gator527 - 12-05-2020, 03:41 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 12-05-2020, 07:23 AM
RE: Creation - by gator527 - 12-05-2020, 08:34 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 12-05-2020, 09:03 AM



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