Creation
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(11-18-2020, 02:31 AM)philip Wrote:  Creation

why is there something 
rather than nothing?
a question often heard I like the rhyme here with absurd, but I wonder what this line is doing otherwise? The syntax is a little twisted. Taking out this line has little effect on the meaning of the poem

because no matter Can because be cut?

how unlikely
the universe might be

nothing

would be more absurd

Hey creation, I'm longing for an image in this poem, or something to hold onto, perhaps a puzzling ambiguity, I'm not sure.  It is clever. Thnx for sharing!
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Messages In This Thread
Creation - by philip - 11-18-2020, 02:31 AM
RE: Creation - by Bunx - 11-19-2020, 05:16 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 11-20-2020, 12:17 AM
RE: Creation - by Socialite - 11-20-2020, 12:26 AM
RE: Creation - by Miley - 11-22-2020, 04:51 PM
RE: Creation - by philip - 11-27-2020, 02:01 AM
RE: Creation - by gator527 - 12-05-2020, 03:41 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 12-05-2020, 07:23 AM
RE: Creation - by gator527 - 12-05-2020, 08:34 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 12-05-2020, 09:03 AM



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