When a Spider Dies
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This is quite clever, and effective with the turn at the end.  I was expecting something more... elevated there, but what you did certainly works.

But, oh, those foolish flies!  For decedent's web remains, and will continue to entangle them for days if not weeks... without even the surcease of being eaten!
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When a Spider Dies - by philip - 11-19-2020, 11:44 PM
RE: When a Spider Dies - by dukealien - 11-19-2020, 11:58 PM
RE: When a Spider Dies - by CRNDLSM - 11-24-2020, 08:50 AM
RE: When a Spider Dies - by philip - 11-27-2020, 01:40 AM
RE: When a Spider Dies - by CRNDLSM - 11-27-2020, 02:02 AM



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