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Creation
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11-19-2020, 05:16 AM
It is pretty bare bones, love the idea. One suggestion is adding some minimal punctuation. I get and like the stylist choice to go no caps, though I would suggest getting rid of the "because" and adding a period at the end of the poem.
Fun read, thanks for the post and puns.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
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RE: Creation - by Bunx - 11-19-2020, 05:16 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 11-20-2020, 12:17 AM
RE: Creation - by Socialite - 11-20-2020, 12:26 AM
RE: Creation - by Miley - 11-22-2020, 04:51 PM
RE: Creation - by philip - 11-27-2020, 02:01 AM
RE: Creation - by gator527 - 12-05-2020, 03:41 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 12-05-2020, 07:23 AM
RE: Creation - by gator527 - 12-05-2020, 08:34 AM
RE: Creation - by philip - 12-05-2020, 09:03 AM
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