Murmurings of Rainfall's Ghost (Rondelet)

[alonso ramoran]

We rain through time
congealed in memory's malaise.
We rain through time
and steel, on carcasses and slime,
with secrets washed from yesterday's
forever. In this methane-haze,
we rain through time.








Below is the version I'm using in my collection

                        ...washed through time congealed

in memory's malaise and carcasses 
 
                       we rain on steel and slime forever

through methane-haze with secrets washed

                                    from yesterday's forever

            in memory's malaise, we rain through time

congealed in slime and secrets,

            washed from carcasses and steel

in memory's methane-haze, secrets, washed

                                    from yesterday's malaise and slime,

            rain on carcasses congealed in time

                        from slime, we rain through steel

and memory's carcasses, congealed forever in...