Forest Pond - edit

[Knot]

But not everyone knows that a non-white egret is a heron

I didn't  

Hi duke,
I like the popping k sounds of the original (plus 'carp'), though also stumbled with poses (and not sure is shimmers is an improvement)
This picture
http://fineartamerica.com/images/artwork...-barry.jpg
made me wonder about 'coiled'.
('in' or 'above' for 'on'?)


Enjoyed the read. Great last line.


Best, Knot


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