09-20-2020, 09:24 PM
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Hi rabbit,
can't add much to what Richard has said, except a rather drastic suggestion: cut everything but the last
(ever so slightly tweaked) couplet (something like As Man reflects / he sees himself )
Best, Knot
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Hi rabbit,
can't add much to what Richard has said, except a rather drastic suggestion: cut everything but the last
(ever so slightly tweaked) couplet (something like As Man reflects / he sees himself )
Best, Knot
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