09-20-2020, 04:31 AM
Hey,
I liked your writing. Lots of solid word selection and phrasing. I just wish it was about something else. The whole "corporate satan" thing is a little thin to me. This feels like expensive paint on a bland scetch. Keep pounding, my friend.
Jack
I liked your writing. Lots of solid word selection and phrasing. I just wish it was about something else. The whole "corporate satan" thing is a little thin to me. This feels like expensive paint on a bland scetch. Keep pounding, my friend.
Jack