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09-12-2020, 06:04 AM

I really liked this and agree with others on the level of detail on the backstory. This seems about right to me. One thing caught my eye in the line "In nature our stories become small and the sky becomes large". Is there a way to show these two things instead of telling?

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Nature - by ComposerMike - 05-12-2020, 03:00 PM

RE: Nature - by Pure Evil - 06-09-2020, 05:51 AM

RE: Nature - by Bunx - 06-10-2020, 01:25 AM

RE: Nature - by ComposerMike - 06-10-2020, 03:15 AM

RE: Nature - by penneddown - 06-12-2020, 12:50 AM

RE: Nature - by Lilly123 - 09-09-2020, 11:25 AM

RE: Nature - by mizron - 09-12-2020, 06:04 AM

RE: Nature - by huntermitch - 09-16-2020, 02:21 AM

RE: Nature - by nearlyhere - 10-10-2020, 09:57 AM

RE: Nature - by TranquillityBase - 02-01-2021, 09:14 PM

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