09-12-2020, 02:19 AM
Lily123 this is my first attempt at critique.
I feel something pure and untainted in this poem and I like it.
It is short but the emotion that goes with it stirs something broader in the reader, and that to me is the reason I read poetry.
Keep it up!
I feel something pure and untainted in this poem and I like it.
It is short but the emotion that goes with it stirs something broader in the reader, and that to me is the reason I read poetry.
Keep it up!