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Who Am I?
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09-08-2020, 09:26 AM
Sometimes I struggle to understand the meaning of poems, but this was NOT such case. Some of my favorite parts are "mirror in a bed of words" and "sands the edges of a person still forming." I think one part that you may want to reconsider is "slave to failure," because I think that using the word "prone" or "bound" or "chained" (or something similar) might have a more applicable-to-life resonance with the reader.
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RE: Who Am I? - by rowens - 04-09-2020, 05:13 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by savannah - 04-09-2020, 08:19 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by rowens - 04-09-2020, 09:15 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by savannah - 04-09-2020, 09:32 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by rowens - 04-10-2020, 04:42 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by easywayout - 04-10-2020, 07:49 PM
RE: Who Am I? - by savannah - 04-11-2020, 02:35 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by Marissacharles__ - 04-11-2020, 03:16 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by Lilly123 - 09-08-2020, 09:26 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by RhythmGuy - 10-15-2020, 08:29 AM
RE: Who Am I? - by TranquillityBase - 02-01-2021, 09:05 PM
RE: Who Am I? - by Erock - 01-09-2022, 05:31 PM
RE: Who Am I? - by Quixilated - 01-14-2022, 08:12 PM
RE: Who Am I? - by DragonBlue - 01-13-2022, 05:32 PM
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