Indy Imp

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hi can u please review my poem entitled "Why? Needs wants and wishes." you'll find it in the basic critique list. thanks again. Sure, thanks for your critique

as for your poem I personally think its great it reminds me of something I would've analyzed in my so relieved I'm at least 6th grade level 6th Grade literature class. your play on words is fairly remarkable  however its a bit confusing in the line " its so metal" as well as "I'm so indy" because previously you'd said call you indy indicating it was a noun not adjective also I'm not too sure what you mean by its so metal. Music terms, being metal is slang for attitudes embodied by 'metal' music.  Same thing with 'indy' which is softer more obscure otherwise I think its a pretty creative poem and a great foundation to build off of. 

I started with the 49th chemical element Indium and tried to relate a song to my music. Indy as a name and adjective, maybe I should say 'trendy' instead of 'bendy' or 'windy' somewhere.