Hot Now
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In Misc, but I think those boundaries blurred a long time ago. :-)
sans 'sordid', 'hero', and 'maudlin', this would be a fine poem. Regardless of whether these words apply or not, it is too much of the author intruding - and in the case of 'maudlin' - too anachronistic. Prithee, what hast the hand of thyne anarch wrought, rhymester?
Also, do 'Lie now' and 'minimum' fit the metre?
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Hot Now - by dukealien - 08-14-2020, 05:12 AM
RE: Hot Now - by busker - 08-14-2020, 05:22 AM
RE: Hot Now - by dukealien - 08-14-2020, 05:37 AM



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