The Tempest (Haiku)
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Sun, dark clouds--
Slanted rain thunder lightning,
sunshine

And get rid of the The in the title.  Where do people learn this word, 'formally'?

The trick, and it is a trick, is to aggressively arrange the words and feeling tones gently into sound. And then you'll have a gentle magic in your makeup.

Or if you insist on being asian about it.


Sun, clouds--
rain thunder lightning,
sunshine

……...………...……...…………...…......

The new weather has finally cleared here for a few hours, Torkelbuger. I wonder if you've seen it, differently.

There's also


Shine, clouds--
rain thunder lightning,
sun


if you're in the mahamudra mood.
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Messages In This Thread
The Tempest (Haiku) - by Torkelburger - 07-31-2020, 12:11 AM
RE: The Tempest (Haiku) - by busker - 08-02-2020, 11:11 AM
RE: The Tempest (Haiku) - by Exit - 08-02-2020, 11:54 PM
RE: The Tempest (Haiku) - by Tiger the Lion - 08-03-2020, 12:45 AM
RE: The Tempest (Haiku) - by Torkelburger - 08-03-2020, 10:48 PM
RE: The Tempest (Haiku) - by rowens - 08-08-2020, 03:53 AM



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