Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
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(08-06-2020, 10:09 AM)busker Wrote:  
(08-06-2020, 07:43 AM)Exit Wrote:  Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
 
 
Puppies 
            Puppies
                        Puppies
 
What’s that all about?
 
Puppies
 
kittens 
            rabbits.
 
 
This works
I can jump through a window!
 
I can jump through a window.
I can earn a crust, from that.
From jumping through a window.
 
—You said “I can jump through a window” too much.
 
—But I can paint a puppy.
It doesn’t mean anything. 
But I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant but means nothing.
I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant.
It means nothing.
 
It means nothing.
Looks good.
But means
nothing.
Looks good.
            But
                                    Means
                        Nothing.
 
Do you like it?
I said yes I will yes I ... zzzzzz
Brilliant

Let me clarify why it's brilliant.
It's not easy to write SoC material. 99% of the time it comes out as really bad poo.
Thanks you.
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Messages In This Thread
Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus) - by Exit - 08-06-2020, 07:43 AM
RE: Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus) - by Exit - 08-06-2020, 09:17 AM
RE: Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus) - by busker - 08-06-2020, 10:09 AM
RE: Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus) - by Exit - 08-07-2020, 07:41 AM



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