08-06-2020, 05:29 AM
(08-06-2020, 04:04 AM)Torkelburger Wrote: I ask the Live OaksI think this one performs better if the title is included. What I mean is, as a haiku the title is pretty much cheating. As a short poem the title helps the piece along (as it's meant to) without being intrusive.
at the edge of the forest,
"What are you hiding?"
