De profundis (final)

[Knot]

final edit posted

Famous last words.

Hi Busker,
not that keen on 'tidy sea', and you might still consider some trimming.


De profundis

Darling boy, whose lips are summer
Sangiovese, dawn light tangling
in your hair, as in a wood

As In my dreams, a Tuscan sun
alights on sea. a boat some men.
Red, malachite and gold the day.

Their haloed heads, golden hay
They youthful leap into a tidy the sea,
(shame about 'into' twice)
each as supple as a wave

and I sink into down to depths.
where Cranes are wheeling overhead.


Regards, Not


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