Constellations - edit2

[busker]

I always love a good energy related poem. This is one.
But I didn't much care for the banality of:

"each confirming that its host
is drawing juice."

I think the poem is better off without the above lines, which doesn't convey any information that is not implied anyway.
"Constellations" as a title brings to mind Ted Kooser's 'Flying at night'. That's just to me, though. But it's a nice if  unintended allusion.
https://poets.org/poem/flying-night