Silence Doubles As The Well Deepens
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(07-31-2020, 09:40 AM)busker Wrote:  On second reading, I think the forced nature of the rhymes works, given that the narrator could be a plumber from Sutherland with marital problems. Not that plumbers from Sutherland can't have read Classics at Balliol.
But seriously, I like the choice of the title, and the wish fulfillment nature of the text.
The second 'beautiful' is rather bland, even if deliberate.
Where's the forced rhyme?
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Silence Doubles As The Well Deepens - by Exit - 07-31-2020, 05:21 AM
RE: Silence Doubles As The Well Deepens - by Exit - 07-31-2020, 09:27 AM
RE: Silence Doubles As The Well Deepens - by Exit - 07-31-2020, 10:01 AM
RE: Silence Doubles As The Well Deepens - by Exit - 08-01-2020, 01:19 AM



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