Silence Doubles As The Well Deepens

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Silence Doubles As The Well Deepens


I’ll dig up the garden,
remove the dead flowers 
and trees.
And once it’s all done,
or better undone,
I’ll love you like love’s on its knees.
 
And you’ll read like a book
with a beautiful mouth, 
and all of our kisses
will rhyme.
And then you’ll unlock
the safe to a clock
that tells the most beautiful time.

'You'll read like a book with a beautiful month' - wow! I thought. That's an original metaphor...type...thing. But it says 'mouth'. 
Rhyming 'rhyme' with 'time' is a crime.
And it gets mouthy at the end. The 'l' in the 'clock' is easy to miss.

this is my favourite house renovation. They pu t the toilet in the kitttchen.