Wheatfield with Crows (Cinquain)

[dukealien]

There, lies
melancholy:
forces of renewal
beneath troubled skies--a wheatfield
with crows.

Adam DH Torkelson

A nice image and thought. Though critique was not requested, can't help thinking how (outside the form) this could be even more spare and stark -

[was going to insert an example, but it would have been a rewrite, so, no].

Good, thanks for posting.