07-22-2020, 12:19 AM
This has some interesting imagery and paints a scene well.
The problem I am have is that it leaves me wanting more, like what's the bigger picture?
Maybe, add a scene scene from your older life?
Maybe, you're like the older woman somehow, and this is a reflection of you?
Maybe, this is somehow cleaning your "soul"?
Don't be afraid to alter real events to for the sake of a better piece. (One of the best things I ever learned.) Memory is notoriously inaccurate anyway.
The problem I am have is that it leaves me wanting more, like what's the bigger picture?
Maybe, add a scene scene from your older life?
Maybe, you're like the older woman somehow, and this is a reflection of you?
Maybe, this is somehow cleaning your "soul"?
Don't be afraid to alter real events to for the sake of a better piece. (One of the best things I ever learned.) Memory is notoriously inaccurate anyway.