Division

[Valerie Please]

Get rid of that ellipses. It does nothing for the poem.

Thank you busker and Jagged Edge for the feedback.

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Get rid of that ellipses. It does nothing for the poem.

Thank you busker and Jagged Edge for the feedback.

Here’s the rework, changing out the original line 12 for two new lines that are meant to give more clarity to the idea of the poem, and also eliminating one repetition of the word “Division”

Also the formatting should be cleaner:

Division 
Division doesn’t care 
about the whole.
Division cares about:
the incision,
the estrangement,
the divorce.
Even if there were
something left not
burning,
imploded,
ruined:
it’s only the destruction
that counts.
As far as Division is concerned
it’s the act of undoing 
that is doing.
Division is the grey man
methodically measuring
the degrees of separation.

Thanks again for the reads and feedback.