Division

[Valerie Please]

I'm more concerned with autoeroticism. Why do people insist on using abstract art as their avatars?

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I dress in red all the time and nobody thinks I'm sexy.

Look, black and white is a great way to look like you’re not trying to hard. “I just woke up pretentious.” Is it possible that red is trying to hard? 

Maybe consider something in a jewel tone. Like a teal or purple. Jewel tones are great for all complexions and never go out of season.

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Division 
Division doesn’t care 
About the whole.
Division cares about
The incision 
The estrangement 
The divorce
Even if there were
Something left not
Burning
Imploded
Ruined....
Division can’t see it.
As far as Division is concerned
It’s the act of undoing 
that is doing.
Division is the grey man
methodically measuring
the degrees of separation.

Very much enjoyed. For me the poem would benefit from a few formatting tweaks, but my ideas on presentation aren't universal and the poem stands up just fine as it is. I'm not sure if Line 12 helps or hurts the poem and since this is in "fun", I won't dwell on it too long. Thanks for posting.

It might be fun to hear what you’d say...but maybe it’s for a future post in the right forum. Either way, thanks for the read and reply.