07-16-2020, 11:45 PM
(07-16-2020, 08:15 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote: Interesting, but this poem feels like a list and not something substantial.I mean, what can I say, I think you're probably right. It's definitely a list of some sort. Sometimes I find the concept around the poem more substantial than the concepts within it. Ideally, I suppose, both concepts (inner and outer) will be inextricably linked. I don't think I quite got there with this one.
Thanks for commenting. I appreciate that.
