07-15-2020, 09:16 AM
(07-15-2020, 08:27 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote:It has all the meaningful imagery and syntax! well my work here is done.(07-15-2020, 07:11 AM)Exit Wrote:It's ok, also I want to mention that this poem has some interesting lines, in fact the whole poem shined through with meaningful imagery and great syntax, well done.(07-15-2020, 01:43 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote: I don't like the size of the font, make it bigger. Also, the poem itself makes me think, and in a good philosophical way."I don't like the size of the font, make it bigger."no.
and I'm sorry I made you think, I never meant to put you, or anyone else, through that.
