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(07-15-2020, 08:27 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote:  
(07-15-2020, 07:11 AM)Exit Wrote:  
(07-15-2020, 01:43 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote:  I don't like the size of the font, make it bigger. Also, the poem itself makes me think, and in a good philosophical way.
"I don't like the size of the font, make it bigger."  Thumbsup no.
and I'm sorry I made you think, I never meant to put you, or anyone else, through that.
It's ok, also I want to mention that this poem has some interesting lines, in fact the whole poem shined through with meaningful imagery and great syntax, well done.
It has all the meaningful imagery and syntax! well my work here is done.
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