The Whistling Wind
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The Whistling Wind

The whistling wind sounds like you
I lay at dawn and listen
The whistling wind sounds like you
Slowly through the crevasses of my window
The whistling wind sounds like you
My neighbor wants to get it fixed
The whistling wind sounds like you
I sometimes try to muffle the sound
The whistling wind sounds like you
It never stays that way for long
The whistling wind sounds like you
The tone is audible throughout the building
The whistling wind sounds like you
I can almost hear it down the lane way
The whistling wind sounds like you
In the morning, everything sounds like it...

I don't mind.
~I hope to see my Pilot face to face 
When I have crost the bar.Alfred, Lord Tennyson
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The Whistling Wind - by muteyy - 07-12-2020, 06:43 AM
RE: The Whistling Wind - by Exit - 07-13-2020, 04:35 AM
RE: The Whistling Wind - by Valerie Please - 07-17-2020, 07:38 AM



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