01-12-2010, 04:51 PM
This poem isn't mine, it's my sister's. She asked me to post so she could get some feedback. (maybe i could convince her to join) She says thanks in advance for the comments 
Translation
Comprehension is a key
(one of many)
Transparent
Evanescent
between us
Although
We have an understanding
A keyhole of words
actions
windowed eyes
Through which definitions
defy and promise
meaning despite
the density of the
damning doors
Translation
Comprehension is a key
(one of many)
Transparent
Evanescent
between us
Although
We have an understanding
A keyhole of words
actions
windowed eyes
Through which definitions
defy and promise
meaning despite
the density of the
damning doors
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?