Jacob

[Knot]

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Hi penned.

Yeah, not sure that L3 improves matters.  Not sure that this will help either, but ...

Days later I was as dried out

as my grandmothers old towels -

thin and skin raw / skin raw and worn thin -

Something soft loved too hard.

On the plus side, loving the apostrophe

Anything better than 'wind'?  ('Grief' maybea bit much, but you get the idea)

billowed in the blue half light ?

Best, Knot

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