Lips

[Linds]

The line, "savoring each luscious lips" is confusing to me. It seems to be a simple matter of a conflicting plural noun and singular adjective, but perhaps this was done on purpose? I will add that using the noun lips would refer to the speaker kissing multiple people, though the main focus of this poem seems to be a singular lover. I would love to hear your thoughts about it.

The overall mood created is exquisite. I love the descriptiveness.