This is not Magic
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This is...

damn good.

I don't always like the vague sort of "this is" constructions, but you add so many concrete details and the crushing weight of the details on a relationship has a real Stephen Dobyns midlife crisis poem type of read.

One of your better ones. Very much enjoyed.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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This is not Magic - by Tiger the Lion - 06-05-2020, 02:50 PM
RE: This is not Magic - by Todd - 06-06-2020, 12:38 AM
RE: This is not Magic - by Tiger the Lion - 06-09-2020, 02:14 PM
RE: This is not Magic - by billy - 06-09-2020, 03:56 PM
RE: This is not Magic - by Bunx - 06-10-2020, 12:24 AM
RE: This is not Magic - by Mark A Becker - 06-10-2020, 08:57 AM



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