The Least of These - Edit3
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The Least of These


Last night I watched an accidental roach
run frantic patterns in a plastic trash
receptacle with sides too slick to climb.
I thought of two or three things I could do:
spray down some poison, crush it with a shoe,
or tip the bin outside and let it limp
away on moonless moss.  Instead I took
no action; in the morning it was dead.
But now I feel somehow I’ve failed a test.


edit2;

Last night I watched an ordinary roach
run frantic circuits in a plastic trash
receptacle with sides too slick for it
to climb.  I thought of things that I might do:
spray down some poison, crush it with a shoe,
or tip the bin outside and let it crawl
away on moonless moss.  Instead I took
no action; in the morning it was dead.
But now I feel somehow I’ve failed a test.


edit 1;

Last night I watched a cockroach vainly dash
through frantic circuits in a plastic trash
receptacle with sides too slick and new
to climb.  I thought of things that I could do:
spray in some poison, crush it with a shoe,
or tip the bin outside and let it book
for home on moonless grass.  Instead I took
no action; by this morning it had died.
Could I have helped?  Perhaps I should have tried.

original version;

Last night I watched a solitary roach
run frantic circuits in a plastic trash
receptacle with sides too slick for it
to climb.  I thought of things that I could do:
spray in some poison, crush it with a shoe,
or tip the bin outside and let it crawl
away on moonless grass.  Instead I took
no action; in the morning it was dead.
But now I feel I’ve somehow failed a test.
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The Least of These - Edit3 - by dukealien - 05-25-2020, 05:59 AM
RE: The Least of These - by Knot - 05-25-2020, 08:15 PM
RE: The Least of These - Edit - by dukealien - 05-27-2020, 10:46 AM
RE: The Least of These - Edit - by Knot - 05-27-2020, 07:07 PM
RE: The Least of These - Edit - by dukealien - 05-27-2020, 10:31 PM
RE: The Least of These - Edit - by Wjames - 06-01-2020, 10:56 AM
RE: The Least of These - Edit2 - by dukealien - 06-09-2020, 05:09 AM
RE: The Least of These - Edit2 - by Mark A Becker - 06-10-2020, 11:20 AM
RE: The Least of These - Edit2 - by dukealien - 06-14-2020, 05:45 AM
RE: The Least of These - Edit3 - by penneddown - 06-14-2020, 07:01 PM
RE: The Least of These - Edit3 - by dukealien - 06-15-2020, 04:22 AM



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