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(12-13-2009, 04:25 AM)kentucky-kid Wrote:  The sky so blue
And yet so dull.
Even the Sun
Had chosen to hide beneath the Clouds.

A wave of nostalgia
Swept over me,
As I gazed
At the unfamillar roads and streets.

The black strands
Untangled itself
As it tried to flee from the foreign land.

A shimmering pearl
Fell out the corner
Of my eye.
As If on cue,
the others cascaded
down my cheeks like a flowing waterfall.

A cringing sound
Awoke me from the depthss of my dream.
And then I realised,

I was home.

This was how I felt when I went overseas myself for the first time and it was then I realised how much I wanted to be home and also how much I wished this was but a Dream.
nice little poem kk.
a few to many cliches ( phrases you hear a lot)
it reads well though and imparts what the writer says easily.
thanks for posting it.
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Messages In This Thread
Home - by kentucky-kid - 12-13-2009, 04:25 AM
RE: Home - by billy - 12-13-2009, 06:02 AM
RE: Home - by Gilberte - 03-10-2014, 10:54 AM
RE: Home - by jeremyyoung - 03-10-2014, 11:33 PM
RE: Home - by geoff - 03-12-2014, 11:30 AM
RE: Home - by Carousal - 03-12-2014, 09:45 PM
RE: Home - by John Galt - 03-15-2014, 02:12 AM



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