05-10-2020, 12:06 PM
(05-10-2020, 04:41 AM)JaggedEdge Wrote: I have no idea how to explain "add more imagery" to you, your going to have to make them descriptive.
I understand that you have no idea as to how to explain “add more imagery” but as an individual who knows enough about poetry to critique, I thought I may get an example of how you may personally word one of the stanzas which you feel is lacking. The last time I previously made work more descriptive I was told the work was too “flowery” and to simplify. As such I’m getting the impression that good or bad poetry can be dependant on personal taste?

