Nemo Resideo
#2
Well, well, well, then... no man left behind it is, though the current apocolypse has indeed left many behind.

The second and third stanzas resonate with me, while the first and fourth not as much.

That said, my favorite lines are:
" the moon waxes
with the bottle's wane"

Perhaps "while" instead of "with" ?  I'm sure sure you wrestled those lines already, so I'll just drink it in as presented.

Interesting take on our current situation...

Thanks,
Mark
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Nemo Resideo - by Tiger the Lion - 04-29-2020, 09:56 AM
RE: Nemo Resideo - by Mark A Becker - 04-30-2020, 06:13 AM
RE: Nemo Resideo - by Tiger the Lion - 05-07-2020, 08:04 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!