04-09-2020, 09:32 AM
[quote="rowens" pid='248739' dateline='1586391325']
I'm saying that the speaker is claiming not to be a good poet. Or the person is pleading for assistance in becoming a poet. An initiation. You must be hoping the poem transcends itself. Tricky business.
Ah. That is an aspect I did not think of, honestly. Does the poem overall read as being too pretentious or stuffed? How does it feel overall, if you do not mind me asking this question..I apologize if I am bugging you.
I'm saying that the speaker is claiming not to be a good poet. Or the person is pleading for assistance in becoming a poet. An initiation. You must be hoping the poem transcends itself. Tricky business.
Ah. That is an aspect I did not think of, honestly. Does the poem overall read as being too pretentious or stuffed? How does it feel overall, if you do not mind me asking this question..I apologize if I am bugging you.