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NaPM, April 5, 2020
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04-07-2020, 04:57 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-07-2020, 04:57 PM by RiverNotch.)
Todd that thing really reminds me of Louise Gluck, the imagery sorta hearkens back to the stuff where she contemplates infancy or when she embodies the plants of her garden--- nice and juicy. Would move the is in the penultimate line up to end the penultimate penultimate line, though. Lovely stuff.
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NaPM, April 5, 2020 - by Quixilated - 04-05-2020, 11:08 AM
RE: NaPM, April 5, 2020 - by Todd - 04-06-2020, 01:22 AM
RE: NaPM, April 5, 2020 - by dukealien - 04-06-2020, 07:45 AM
RE: NaPM, April 5, 2020 - by Keith - 04-06-2020, 08:29 AM
RE: NaPM, April 5, 2020 - by RiverNotch - 04-07-2020, 04:57 PM
RE: NaPM, April 5, 2020 - by Todd - 04-07-2020, 10:25 PM
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